Sunday, April 15, 2012

Rewrite

O blessed Editor, revise
My life in its first draft!
With cosmic pencil, analyze
And then perform your craft

I’m swamped with character and plot
I haven’t got a theme
This drama has me all distraught
I need to be redeemed

O Editor, help me rewrite
This tangled history
Trim out the dialogue outright
And cut the mystery

And then I’ll wake with vision fresh
And hope in new supply
O grant this editing request
And give me a retry

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Format: Hymnal Stanza
Prompt: NaPoMoFo 15

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